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Grath Longfletch
« Thread Started on Feb 10, 2006, 7:51pm »		[Quote]
Name:Grath Lobngfletch

Age:15 seasons

Gender: female

Species: river otter

Physical Appearance: Grath has especially dark fur, which is really thick. She towers over other otters by a head. Her white underbelly contrasts greatly against her dark coat.

Personality: Grath has an intent hatred towards all vermin in general, and sea-vermin in particular, since they kiiled her entire family. Under all that rough interior, she has a gentler side.

Weapons and Personal Items: Longbow with green fletched arrows. She also carries a small dagger with a crooked blade.

Job: Killing vermin

History: Sea-vermin killed her family to get the Pearls of Lutra. Grath was unconious, and nursed by two shrews. When she woke, she vowed to kill all vermin. A green fisher bird dead on the shore gave the feathers for her arrows.

Relationships: none
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But no cage was ever made to hold a creature such as he
No chain was ever forged to bind the wind
And when I think about all the scars he left on me
The cruelest are the ones I bear within.
Softly I crept near to him bound him in a subtle cage
I trapped him with my sorcery but it only woke his rage

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Re: Grath Longfletch
« Reply #1 on Feb 10, 2006, 9:09pm »		[Quote]
You need more description on Physical Appearance, I suggest. Like, maybe how tall she is, how much she weighs, etc. Your Personality is pretty good, and your History is a little short of my approving skills, but I suppose it'll work. Maybe a little more on Weapons and Personal Items. Other than those, your bio is excellent!
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Re: Grath Longfletch
« Reply #2 on Feb 10, 2006, 9:16pm »		[Quote]
Hows that
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But no cage was ever made to hold a creature such as he
No chain was ever forged to bind the wind
And when I think about all the scars he left on me
The cruelest are the ones I bear within.
Softly I crept near to him bound him in a subtle cage
I trapped him with my sorcery but it only woke his rage

CLICK!
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Re: Grath Longfletch
« Reply #3 on Feb 10, 2006, 9:19pm »		[Quote]
Hmmm, just under my guidelines, lol, it could use some work, but my opinions don't matter.

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Re: Grath Longfletch
« Reply #4 on Feb 10, 2006, 9:20pm »		[Quote]
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But no cage was ever made to hold a creature such as he
No chain was ever forged to bind the wind
And when I think about all the scars he left on me
The cruelest are the ones I bear within.
Softly I crept near to him bound him in a subtle cage
I trapped him with my sorcery but it only woke his rage

CLICK!
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Re: Grath Longfletch
« Reply #5 on Jun 30, 2006, 6:11pm »		[Quote]
wasn't this the otter from Pearls of Lutra?
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Re: Grath Longfletch
« Reply #6 on Jun 30, 2006, 6:16pm »		[Quote]
Yes
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But no cage was ever made to hold a creature such as he
No chain was ever forged to bind the wind
And when I think about all the scars he left on me
The cruelest are the ones I bear within.
Softly I crept near to him bound him in a subtle cage
I trapped him with my sorcery but it only woke his rage

CLICK!
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Re: Grath Longfletch
« Reply #7 on Nov 11, 2008, 8:30pm »		[Quote]
Oh wow. I CANNOT believe I actually posted this and expected to be accepted! So scary to go back and look at what you used to be like...
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